Passion


Poetry

Passion, dreams

Hobbies, entertainment

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I live in a free world

Inside my mind

And float in the sea

Of words and rhyme

I paint my days

With colors of wine

And dance to the tune

Of the flowing time

With every song I sing, I create a symphony

And in every dream I see, I end an agony

In every breath, there’s harmony

And I live….

…with passion

 

 

 

 

This was written for The Poetry Potluck week 14

Happy Potluck!!

 

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20 Comments

  1. December 13, 2010 at 2:32 pm

    I like this as well, I like the flow, sweetness emanates and may cause cavities :p lol Nicely done
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/my-poetic-man/

    • Alethea said,

      December 13, 2010 at 2:50 pm

      Really?..lol. Thanks for dropping in!
      Happy Potluck 😀

  2. Jingle said,

    December 13, 2010 at 4:17 pm

    This is super pleasant read.
    love it a lot.
    🙂

    Thanks for linking.

    A+

  3. Jessica said,

    December 13, 2010 at 4:47 pm

    Your passion comes out in your words! This flows along really well.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/ice-cream/

  4. December 13, 2010 at 7:31 pm

    Alethea, nice to read you again. I’ve been on hiatus…

    My favorite line, “And in every dream I see, I end an agony,” very telling. Really loved the entire poem.

    Amy Barlow Liberatore
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/the-precious-box-jingle-poetry-potluck/

    • Alethea said,

      December 14, 2010 at 10:02 am

      Hey good to see you..glad you liked the poem.
      Coming over to your place 🙂

  5. deadpoet88 said,

    December 14, 2010 at 12:24 pm

    Amazing piece! Really enjoyed reading it.

    Loved these lines the most:

    “With every song I sing, I create a symphony

    And in every dream I see, I end an agony

    In every breath, there’s harmony”

  6. Kavita said,

    December 17, 2010 at 6:22 am

    Beautiful! How lovely is the combination of dreams and freedom.. don’t you think? Ultimate freedom… wow.. smells real good!
    Fits in so perfectly with the theme… very nicely written, Asmita!!

  7. Artswebshow said,

    December 18, 2010 at 3:05 am

    I really like this.
    I like the loose form it holds, excellent

  8. Scent of my heart said,

    December 18, 2010 at 1:31 pm

    What a lovely writing here, I’m sorry I couldn’t get back to your blog earlier. Thanks for visiting mine! Keep painting your days with the colors of wine.
    Wishing you a Merry Christmas season!

    I want to say thank you for the support to Jingle Poetry, with you standing beside us, we are able to continue our efforts by providing the platform for poets who share and encourage…BEST wishes for the year 2011…your poetry has enlightened our community and made us smile.

    Blessings fly your way, Happy Holidays!

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

    Hope to see you on Sunday Poetry Potluck again, let me know if you have questions..old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome..

    week 15 theme: reflections, interpretations, and musings.

    Once again, great poem. pleasure to read it!

    • Alethea said,

      December 19, 2010 at 9:31 am

      Thank you for the lovely comment…will surely participate in the Potluck. Love it!!

  9. Sam373 said,

    December 19, 2010 at 6:10 pm

    “PASSION” A new face. I LIKE very much. I will read more and know you better.

  10. marie-christine said,

    March 11, 2011 at 5:02 pm

    what a colourful poem
    I love it
    thank you


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