memories of the night

It’s twelve midnight

As this urge I fight

To go near him

Drawn by his endearing sight


His body radiates a heat

I give in unable to beat

The magic of his persona

Always a delicious treat


Over him my fingers run

And then begins the endless fun

He shows me the world

As I sit here, stunned!


We share a connection so deep

But there’s a time to sow and a time to reap

So good night for today Mr. Laptop

You and I should both go to sleep!!!



  1. Scent of my heart said,

    November 27, 2010 at 10:07 am

    Ah, you had me here! Smiles! Thought your talking about someone special, the end was unpredictable! Lovely! Creative!

  2. Scent of my heart said,

    November 27, 2010 at 10:08 am

    Hello, how are you?

    you are invited to join our potluck week 12 at Jingle Poetry :

    Write a poem fitting our week 12 theme (Nature, Plants, Creations & The Cosmos), post it, and link in to our potluck, you are also allowed to link in unrelated poems. we are open Sunday, 8pm, American central time.

    We value your contribution on previous weeks, Hope to see you in.

    Let me know if you have questions.


  3. Artswebshow said,

    November 29, 2010 at 1:48 am

    A fantastic piece of poetry here.
    You’re laptop seems a very charismatic persono

  4. Jingle said,

    December 1, 2010 at 1:52 am

    unique perspective.
    well done…
    Glad to see you post.
    Happy Wednesday!

    • Alethea said,

      December 1, 2010 at 12:43 pm

      Glad to see you here Ji..
      happy Wednesday!! πŸ™‚

  5. Mase Da Rula said,

    December 1, 2010 at 7:02 pm

    (place I See What You Did Here picture) lol… I almost thought this was about a guy.. it edge on the line of erotic… sensual tho… the best kind of nasty… I really enjoyed this one….

    .Mase Da Rula.
    The Ruler’s Kingdom

    • Alethea said,

      December 3, 2010 at 7:15 am

      πŸ˜‰ thanks for the comment….coming over to your blog..

  6. December 1, 2010 at 7:35 pm

    Ha ha ha… the ending. Loved it. Witty. Good job

    • Alethea said,

      December 3, 2010 at 7:18 am

      Glad you did :D…coming over t your place…

  7. Jingle said,

    December 1, 2010 at 8:38 pm

    Happy Rally,
    Thanks for linking in….

    feel free to visit and comment from either participant list or fresh poets list.
    enjoy the treat.

  8. December 1, 2010 at 11:12 pm

    LOL..interesting and fun read.


  9. Tweety said,

    December 2, 2010 at 9:44 am

    hahah i had never thought it would be this…what a lovely imagination… πŸ˜› πŸ˜€

    • Alethea said,

      December 3, 2010 at 7:37 am

      Glad you liked the “surprise” πŸ˜‰ Thanks for dropping in !!

  10. December 2, 2010 at 11:54 am

    This is fun! I can relate to this, my laptop has a temper and he don’t like me to do programming works on it now ever since a few months ago, it will give me blue screen of death when I try to run any program related to programming on it! But i glad it did, so that i don’t have to bring home my work and do >=P haha!

    • Alethea said,

      December 3, 2010 at 7:40 am

      Laptops are like those bad little spoiled kids…haha. But what would we do without them? πŸ˜€

  11. December 2, 2010 at 12:08 pm

    Different thinking, and a different piece of poetry, nice πŸ™‚

  12. Tootsie said,

    December 2, 2010 at 8:05 pm

    ahaha Love this a lot!

  13. December 2, 2010 at 9:11 pm

    I feel the heat!

  14. gnarlyoak said,

    December 2, 2010 at 9:28 pm

    Haha, funny analogy. Had me fooled ’till the end. Good work!

    • Alethea said,

      December 3, 2010 at 8:03 am

      Thank you….feels good to be unpredictable sometimes πŸ™‚

  15. Sam373 said,

    December 2, 2010 at 10:24 pm

    This is poetry at its finest..

    • Alethea said,

      December 3, 2010 at 8:08 am

      Thank you very much….that’s one of the most flattering compliments I have ever received!!

  16. December 3, 2010 at 2:40 am

    Haha, you got me there! I was ready to read about some passionate rendezvous with a lover. Quite a clever piece! πŸ˜‰

  17. Carl said,

    December 3, 2010 at 5:14 am

    That was great fun. I got twisted big time!

  18. tasithoughts said,

    December 4, 2010 at 4:09 pm

    My mind went one way..and you surprised me and then I laughed! loved it!


    • Alethea said,

      December 5, 2010 at 5:06 am

      πŸ˜‰ always feels good to make others laugh πŸ™‚ Thank you for the comment…

  19. dancingfreak said,

    December 7, 2010 at 2:06 pm

    ROFL!!! πŸ˜€

    you ve written it in such a way that people will surely get the wrong idea in the beginning ! πŸ˜‰

    awesome right babes!! πŸ˜€

    • Alethea said,

      December 9, 2010 at 12:56 pm

      hehe… that (the wrong idea) was very much intended. ;)…glad it came across
      Thanks for the lovely comment πŸ™‚

  20. December 11, 2010 at 7:37 pm

    […] Words from within:Β […]

  21. December 20, 2010 at 7:14 pm

    Lol. That is awesome. Always such a dance between work and sleep. Love how it draws me in and switches it up. πŸ˜‰

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