…….a long time ago…..


 

Born in the mountains

As a tiny stream I flow

Destined to meet you

Following the only path I know

Forcing against the currents

Of the winds that come and go

Hoping someday you’d join me

Among the lands high and low

I would then cease to be a stream

And into a lovely river I’d grow

As we reach the sea, we’d be one

Like we were, a long time ago

And carrying the wisdom of the sea

Towards the sky’s heavenly glow

We’d fly once again

Like we did, a long time ago….

 

 

This was written for the Poetry Potluck 🙂 Hope you all like it!!

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24 Comments

  1. pot123 said,

    October 12, 2010 at 2:55 pm

    Good as always Alethea…
    I always like to read good poems once in a while, and hence come to your blog. And you never disappoint me, instead give me surprises with a better poem each time.
    The ideas you bring in are just fabulous. This work of art just shows the creativity within you…

    • Alethea said,

      October 13, 2010 at 4:51 am

      I always love reading your comments…thank you for your kind, inspiring words. I feel honored 🙂

  2. Talon said,

    October 12, 2010 at 3:16 pm

    I loved the flow of this poem so much…just lovely!

  3. Jingle said,

    October 12, 2010 at 5:27 pm

    love the spirits in it.
    well done!

    nature and the universe as one, what fun!
    xx

  4. 2zpoint said,

    October 13, 2010 at 3:27 am

    Simply magnificent Alethea…It lifted my spirits reading this.Thank you

    • Alethea said,

      October 13, 2010 at 4:53 am

      You’re welcome..I’m glad it did that to you 🙂
      Thanks for stopping by!

  5. trisha said,

    October 13, 2010 at 4:19 pm

    this is so very beautiful asmi. what a beautiful and pure love. a very beautifully written poem.

  6. October 18, 2010 at 8:50 am

    it’s brilliant…i’m so glad i found your creations!

  7. trisha said,

    October 18, 2010 at 8:51 am

    Shubho bijoyadashami (Happy Vijayadashami)! May the blessings of the Goddess shower down on you and your loved ones forever.

    • Alethea said,

      October 20, 2010 at 3:29 am

      same to you trisha…although I’m a bit late!!

  8. Jingle said,

    October 19, 2010 at 3:41 am

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/18/get-well-wishes-4-riika-and-leo/

    please help pay a visit to riika and leo today to wish them well..
    Thanks a ton.
    u rock!
    Happy Monday!
    hope to See you at potluck today.

  9. Jingle said,

    October 24, 2010 at 5:28 pm

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/
    Three awards for you, I value your participation at Jingle poetry during past weeks, hope to see you again tonight. Our theme is love and romance, have fun sharing! xxx

  10. Dances With Crayons said,

    October 26, 2010 at 9:50 am

    Enjoyed reading your poems very much! WOW! Like a little treasure chest here, Thankyou : D

    • Alethea said,

      October 27, 2010 at 3:55 pm

      So glad you liked my poems..please feel free to visit anytime!! I seem to be having a writer’s block at the moment though..lol!! Thanks for the comment 🙂

  11. Artswebshow said,

    October 28, 2010 at 11:53 pm

    This is a very good poem.
    Nicely written

  12. trisha said,

    November 5, 2010 at 5:07 pm

    Happy deepawali! May light, happiness and wealth shower down on your world and stay.

    • Alethea said,

      November 14, 2010 at 6:59 am

      Thanks a lot trisha…although it’s a bit too late, wish you and your family all the happiness 🙂

  13. lmcgregor said,

    January 4, 2011 at 4:10 pm

    Lovely, well-thought out. Clever.


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