whole…..again


I let my feet touch

The damp cold ground

I shut my ears as such

To keep the sound

Of the world aside

And despite the pain

I let the rain

Fall briskly on my skin

Hitting every cell of my being

Drop by drop

Again and again

rain

Completely drenched now

Shivering in the cold

Yet I felt warm somehow

As a divine heat flooded my soul

Making it whole,

Once again….

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10 Comments

  1. Kavita said,

    August 3, 2010 at 7:35 pm

    Beautiful!! The rain can REALLY make one feel so alive! It’s quite magical indeed!
    And you’ve brought it out delightfully here… felt so FRESH reading this poem…
    Thanks for sharing…

    • Alethea said,

      August 4, 2010 at 4:09 am

      Hi Kavita, I agree competely…rain IS very magical.
      thank you so much for the kind words πŸ™‚

  2. buttercup600 said,

    August 3, 2010 at 10:00 pm

    This is worthy of a song….so beautiful. xxx

  3. fiveloaf said,

    August 6, 2010 at 3:21 am

    nice reverie..

  4. Alethea said,

    August 6, 2010 at 2:26 pm

    thank you fiveloaf πŸ™‚

  5. lazfreedman said,

    August 9, 2010 at 7:20 pm

    I very much enjoyed your poem, πŸ™‚
    Thank you,
    Peace,
    Laz

    • Alethea said,

      August 10, 2010 at 12:48 pm

      Thank you for coming by! I’m glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  6. kaykaywaters said,

    September 17, 2010 at 12:32 am

    Rain is probably one of my favorite things in life. You captured everything I love about it all in this poem. Your writing is really good. πŸ™‚

  7. Alethea said,

    September 18, 2010 at 9:09 am

    That is really sweet of you Kay…..thank you so much for the comment. I’m glad you enjoyed my writing. πŸ™‚


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